tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5230719080100698351.post7971530881591071909..comments2010-04-21T00:35:27.909+08:00Comments on Effective Team Communication: Roger Nghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04536187265203306153noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5230719080100698351.post-20697695658016965832010-04-06T07:20:35.291+08:002010-04-06T07:20:35.291+08:00Hi Roger,
I felt that your introduction using an ...Hi Roger,<br /><br />I felt that your introduction using an analogy was pretty interesting. Not only did it captures my attention, it also serves well to illustrate your point of using Cloud Computing to offset operating costs of small companies. <br /><br />Although I did not know much about cloud computing before hand, I was able to follow your presentation quite well. Thus, I felt that the depth of technical information was suitable. <br /><br />To make up for its technicalities, you might want to approach it from a more interesting manner. Perhaps, you could add in a few interesting facts about cloud computing, or design a mnemonic that covers the advantages of cloud computing. This would definitely make your presentation leave a deep impression in the audience.<br /><br />On the whole, your delivery was smooth and your pace was suitable. I would look forward to your future presentations.<br /><br />Regards,<br />Ying CongAkiraPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07081962011624860219noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5230719080100698351.post-60714225013220656282010-04-03T11:36:18.795+08:002010-04-03T11:36:18.795+08:00Hello Roger,
I felt that you kicked off the prese...Hello Roger,<br /><br />I felt that you kicked off the presentation well but a few minutes into your speech, you might have lost some of the audience attention since the content seemed a bit technical, even for CEG students like us to handle. More use of examples would have helped I guess.<br /><br />Also, I felt that when compared to your first presentation, you seemed to move around more rather than standing still which is good but you seemed to refer to your script frequently, so this may also have led to loosing the audience's attention. In the future, you could maybe try to memorise what you want to present and bring a cue card along with just the main points which will force you to look at the audience more when elaborating. <br /><br />The pace of your presentation was alright but I felt that at certain parts you could have spoken a bit faster. <br /><br />Cheers:)preetihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08030502914526412249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5230719080100698351.post-36440093000295314632010-04-03T03:30:36.202+08:002010-04-03T03:30:36.202+08:00Hi Roger,
I felt you have made a good start intita...Hi Roger,<br />I felt you have made a good start intitally. However as the presention progressed, you start to refer to your notes rather frequently. As a result, you lost the 'eye-contact' with the audience.<br />You had a loud and clear voice which attracted the audience's attention. Personally I didn't feel that your hand gestures were particularly distracting.<br />I suggest that perhaps you could have memorized what you want to present. <br />Personally, I found the topic to be rather abstract and a relation to layman terms or real life examples would be a good idea. <br />In my opinion, you are improving as a presenter. <br /><br />Regards,<br />Aldenalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10436132215479374241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5230719080100698351.post-91345149317061640502010-04-03T03:28:31.940+08:002010-04-03T03:28:31.940+08:00This comment has been removed by the author.alhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10436132215479374241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5230719080100698351.post-50429826150370457912010-03-31T20:58:41.561+08:002010-03-31T20:58:41.561+08:00Hey Roger!
True that you had captured our attenti...Hey Roger!<br /><br />True that you had captured our attention in the start but as you have mentioned, you should’ve prepared us a little before moving to the more technical parts as the transition was sudden. I also understand about your unidirectional eye contact – this was the same problem I had faced during Oral Presentation 1 and this time I tried to look at everyone.<br /><br />However, I don’t quite agree to your part about using Layman terms. As I said, the transition to the serious parts was sudden. But you definitely shouldn’t have tried using Layman language all through the presentation as it could just be we didn’t quite catch a few parts of your presentation since we didn’t have much of an idea about Cloud Computing. But your actual audience were supposed to be well-educated computer professionals. I believe certain level of formalness should be maintained with them.<br /><br />And yes. I also feel you could’ve used more pictures to make your slides more interesting…<br /><br />KrithikaKrithikahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04778109874820893246noreply@blogger.com